Re: Bug#1038761: startx.1: a few remarks and editing fixes for the manual
Control: reassign -1 xinit
Hi!
[ It seems this got misfiled, leaving the bulk of the mail for context. ]
On Wed, 2023-06-21 at 00:30:04 +0000, Bjarni Ingi Gislason wrote:
> Package: dpkg
> Version: 1.21.22
> Severity: minor
> Tags: patch
>
> Dear Maintainer,
>
> here are a few notes and fixes for the manual.
>
> ###
>
> Input file is startx.1
>
> Change two HYPHEN-MINUSES (code 0x055, 2D) to an em-dash (\(em), if one
> is intended. An en-dash is usually surrounded by a space, while an em-dash
> is used without spaces. "man" (1 byte characters) transforms an en-dash
> (\(en to one HYPHEN-MINUS, and an em-dash to two HYPHEN-MINUSES without
> considering the space around it.
> If "--" are two single "-" (end of options) then use "\-\-".
>
> startx.1:71:startx -- -depth 16
> startx.1:73:startx -- -dpi 100
> startx.1:75:startx -- -layout Multihead
>
> #####
>
> Use the word (in)valid instead of (il)legal if not related to legal
> matters.
> See "www.gnu.org/prep/standards".
> Think about translations into other languages!
>
> startx.1:68:the manual page for your X server to determine which arguments are legal.
>
> #####
>
> Change a HYPHEN-MINUS (code 0x55, 2D) to a minus (\-), if in front of a
> name for an option.
>
> 57:.RB '--'
> 71:startx -- -depth 16
> 73:startx -- -dpi 100
> 75:startx -- -layout Multihead
>
> #####
>
> Wrong distance between sentences.
>
> Separate the sentences and subordinate clauses; each begins on a new
> line. See man-pages(7) ("Conventions for source file layout") and
> "info groff" ("Input Conventions").
>
> The best procedure is to always start a new sentence on a new line,
> at least, if you are typing on a computer.
>
> Remember coding: Only one command ("sentence") on each (logical) line.
>
> E-mail: Easier to quote exactly the relevant lines.
>
> Generally: Easier to edit the sentence.
>
> Patches: Less unaffected text.
>
> The amount of space between sentences in the output can then be
> controlled with the ".ss" request.
>
> 87:is used to start the X session. All discussion of the
>
> #####
>
> Split a punctuation mark from a single argument for a two-font macro
>
> 92:.IR .xsession.
>
> #####
>
> Output from "test-nroff -man -b -ww -z":
>
>
> [ "test-groff" is a developmental version of "groff" ]
>
> Input file is ./startx.1
>
> Output from test-groff -b -mandoc -dAD=l -rF0 -rHY=0 -t -w w -z :
> an.tmac:/tmp/chk_manuals.temp.Vnx9bq:57: style: .RB expects at least 2 arguments, got 1
> an.tmac:/tmp/chk_manuals.temp.Vnx9bq:92: style: .IR expects at least 2 arguments, got 1
>
> ####
>
> --- startx.1 2023-06-20 23:50:11.000000000 +0000
> +++ startx.1.new 2023-06-21 00:13:05.000000000 +0000
> @@ -54,7 +54,7 @@ Arguments immediately following the
> command are used to start a client in the same manner as
> .BR xinit (1).
> The special argument
> -.RB '--'
> +.RB ' \-\- '
> marks the end of client arguments and the beginning of server options.
> It may be convenient to specify server options with startx to change on a
> per-session basis the
> @@ -65,14 +65,14 @@ permitted by the
> server and specified in the
> .BR xorg.conf (5)
> configuration. Some examples of specifying server arguments follow; consult
> -the manual page for your X server to determine which arguments are legal.
> +the manual page for your X server to determine which arguments are valid.
> .RS
> .PP
> -startx -- -depth 16
> +startx \-\- \-depth 16
> .PP
> -startx -- -dpi 100
> +startx \-\- \-dpi 100
> .PP
> -startx -- -layout Multihead
> +startx \-\- \-layout Multihead
> .RE
> .PP
> Note that in the Debian system, what many people traditionally put in the
> @@ -84,12 +84,13 @@ instead; this permits the same X environ
> .IR xdm ,
> or
> .I xinit
> -is used to start the X session. All discussion of the
> +is used to start the X session.
> +All discussion of the
> .I .xinitrc
> file in the
> .IR xinit (1)
> manual page applies equally well to
> -.IR .xsession.
> +.IR .xsession .
> Keep in mind that
> .I .xinitrc
> is used only by
Thanks,
Guillem
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